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Essay Assignment:Hometown Changes
Essay Score: 5
If I could make a big change for my hometown, I will build a new library to make people who live in my hometown read books more easily.
There is a library in my town now, but it is very old and only has few books in there. I went to there several times before and I couldn’t find any new books about the computers. It is a computer age right now. Computers change so fast that you have to keep learning new things from the book. The library should buy more books about computers and other new technologies to let people learn new things.
The old library has no internet. It does not have any computer in it. Internet is playing an important role in our life. You can search data which you are interested in. You can also use the internet to search the books you want to read in this library.
The biggest problem for this old library is too small. It only have one floor and very small space in the open aera. When the books become more and more in the library, it will not have enough space to keep them.
Library is an important place in a town. It can provide many knowledges to the people and it is also a good place to prepare the exam. When in a hot summer day, It is a cool place to read newspapers or books. If I have enough money to make a big change to my hometown, I will build a new library for them.
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